Thursday, August 22, 2019
good i think
Boom Crash Pow. As I get out onto the crunchy cold grass my yofo lands in the middle of nowhere I see random things coming to me I play dead then I say where am i this looks like earth the deadly planet my mate said cars are bad for us we will die we will blow up are planet is different to earth because we don't have cars we have ships but no traffic earth has traffic I landed in a field in a random place but now let's carry on with the story so where was i yes when I landed in south hornby school I think I did the sign said but I think i'm on earth. And that was my story the End.
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Kia Ora Bronx its me Riansha I like your alien perspective writing it it cool. Just saying you wrote UFO wrong maybe next time check your spelling before you post it on your blog but it is OK. And I also like you onomatopoeia you could add speach marks next to the onomatopoeia. Maybe next time you could change your writing because aliens don't know what cars and ships are. Next time you could add a picture of your writing and add what was hard and what was easy.
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